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Ode to My Angel

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Ode to My Angel

This angel may not have fluffy white wings,
Or a bright golden halo above her head,
But an angel indeed she is.
My angel.
A celestial being sent from the heavens,
To guide and help me through the journey that is life.
If angels are said to be beautiful, then my angel is certainly no exception,
And if angels are as kind and loving as they are beautiful,
Then her kindness is great indeed, and her love knows no bounds.
With a voice like a song, and a smile brighter than the sun,
This angel sings words of wisdom that I will forever remember.

Through thick and thin,
My angel has always been there, whispering words of comfort.
When I am drowning in sorrow,
My angel can make my spirits soar like an eagle in the afternoon sky.
This angel has never given up on me, she has taught me many lessons in life,
Especially those concerning courage and love.
Where I once lacked the knowledge of love and understanding,
My angel has filled that hole to the brim, it overflows.
My angel has taught me to believe,
And that believing makes anything possible.

Without my angel, my beautiful angel,
I would still be wandering aimlessly,
Like a mouse in a maze.
Never knowing what it is like to love,
And have that love returned.
I don't write a lot of poetry, and I am certainly not good at it, but I figured I would put this on here, just because. Had to write a poem for english and this is what happened. Picture is not mine, found on google images.
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This is a very beautiful poem, and I can't find a single fault with it, Its seems to be very professional, and I get the feeling that you spent alot of time and effort in writing this, The way you describe everything creates a very imaginative image within one's mind, and helps put across the word/meaning of the poem, I Hope that the person you wrote this for, really enjoyed it, like me and many others, and I hope you continue to write such awesome things in the future, I really think that you should be a professional in writing poems. X3